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This series is addictive. I don't have much free time, but when I have a minute, I read another one or these. Keep them coming.

Lo confundieron con el ladrón de celulares, que experiencia tan desagradable para ud. Gracias por compartir este relato que le sucedió.

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

That's some twist to the story. I saw it coming though, with all the references to time in Part I.
I have to re-read and come up with a more articulate reading, but i like it. It keeps the fast-paced film-like description and this sudden stop, just like the surreal slow motion we experience in a car accident (at least i did once) changes the atmosphere for the better.
Great job.

Excelente @youdontsay como corriste para alejarte de las personas que te querian atrapar y despúes la voluntad que tienes para enfrentarte a ese fantasma que te conseguiste en la estación del Subte. Saludos y Feliz Noche

This is some great writing. Keep writing these stories!

That's some beautiful poetry right there. You almost inspire me to start writing poems myself.

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