VENUS Y FÉNIX PARTE I

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Grateful for the invitation that @joslud has made me to this wonderful community, in which I am pleased to share one of my original short stories, this consists of 3 parts, is called:
Fenix and Venus
I hope you like it!

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FuenteFenix, Queen of Reintard Castle

PART I

In the years she had been living in Reintard Castle, the idea of competing in a great battle against her sister had never occurred to her.

She belonged to another kingdom, a very cold one, she did not like that climate. He did not know the threats she could make and the risks that her presence could surely bring as a consequence... the truth is that the magician Maltus Duc Coll warned him.

Her name was Fenix, queen of the Reintard castle. And her sister, Queen Venus, of the Vencalu castle.

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Venus, Queen of Vencalu Castle

Both were very different since they were little, their parents had died under the siege of their castle, led by pirates who came in search of revenge.

A wrong revenge, their parents were noble, honest people, they had no enemies.

The pirates took possession of that castle for a few days, stole everything they could, returned to their ship and were never heard of again.

As for their parents' castle, as the years went by, it deteriorated. The two queens were 10 years old when they took the lives of the kings. Since then they were separated and taken to other castles, which they had never seen before.

Fenix, had a faithful guard, a messenger and some men who guarded her castle, as well as safeguarding her life. And his sister had the same benefits.

A letter that was delivered to them by the time they turned 14, they understood that they could not be together in the same castle.

A power, far from their reach, was in charge of damaging them from deep inside them, this happened while they shared, being children. So the distancing was necessary.

At the moment they read that letter written by their parents, in it, they confessed the consequences of staying together and what happened right after causing them harm.

Losing consciousness, being left without any memory, became such a part of their lives that they preferred not to bring it to the present.

They celebrated their 18th birthday still far away from each other, exchanged a letter, but at that moment life would teach them a lesson they never thought they would be subjected to experience.

Fenix, the name her mother had chosen, had no idea of the meaning that would mark her life forever. Venus, her father's choice, to name her sister.

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Fuente Wizard Maltus Duc Coll

Maltus Duc Coll, the most feared magician, who appeared at the least expected moment and who had great mastery over dark magic. He, who on a single occasion gave that warning to every queen.

They can never be together, death... that will be the end of them!

Soon Fenix had heard those words, asked for the true intention of this separation, and did not receive the answer.

Fenix had not considered it with the due seriousness it deserved. She decided to set out on a journey to the Vencalu castle, mounted her horse, guarded by two of her guards.

—Did I not tell you that both of you will surely die? Stay away from that castle, Fenix again listened to the wizard's words.

But it didn't make her stop, she has always been a brave person, stubborn, stubborn as her late parents would say. Although she was afraid, she would not give up without first confirming what was troubling her heart.

Finally he had arrived at the Vencalu castle, the cold was getting into his bones, he got off his horse and his body trembled as he walked, he had no weapons with him. He had a power, but he did not know how much it would help him before a big battle, it was to heal some wound, or burn and then leave a mark on the affected area as a reminder.

Her sister had a power, but its magnificence would be demonstrated when they were together. For this reason, Fenix ignored the wizard's warning, and decided to go in search of her sister.

—Fenix, why have you come here? Wasn't it enough that we lost our parents because you and I were together? Concerned to find each other after so many years, Venus asked her sister.

—Now I understand that it's not like Maltus Duc Coll told us! We were separated minutes before our parents were attacked by pirates. Here we are, facing each other, we're fine, Fenix replied with conviction.

—How dare you disobey? Your parents did not make the slightest effort to take away your powers, those that will be a curse in your miserable lives, the wizard introduced himself to them.

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Welcome to Dream Steem!

We like fantasy ;-)) And your Venus looks like Daenerys Targaryen ;-))

Thank you very much for reading and commenting. It is a pleasure for me to write in this community

Welcome, friend,
You've given us a fantasy story with castles, warring princesses, and hidden secrets that are beginning to unravel. It's a pleasure reading your post.

P.S. Check out the Keyword of the Week contest invitation.


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Muchas gracias mi estimado amigo! Lo he leído pero no comprendí cómo participar en el concurso, es decir...debo colocar una palabra en la sección de comentarios? La palabra debe tener relación a alguna cosa o situación en específica? Agradezco la aclaratoria, para así poder participar. Un abrazo fraternal!

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hola
a partir de ahora, los ganadores, propondran cada uno una palabra clave. vas a crear una historia, inspirada en una o en ambas. en la historia aparecen las palabras.

"Eso significa que hay dos maneras de participar en la siguiente ronda del concurso. Elige la que más te guste o prueba ambas propuestas ;-)) Se considerarán todas las participaciones hasta el domingo 18 de mayo a las 14:00 UTC (inclusive) ."


Hello
From now on, the winners will each propose a keyword. You'll create a story inspired by one or both. The words appear in the story.

"This means there are two ways to participate in the next round of the contest. Choose the one you like best or try both ;-)) All entries will be considered until Sunday, May 18th at 2:00 PM UTC (inclusive)."

Saludos, disculpa...en los comentarios ví que colocaste una palabra clave "arándanos rojos" debería escribir una historia en la que se incluya esa palabra clave, para así poder participar?

Si, escribe una historia que la incluya de alguna manera.
Puedes incluir tambien la propuesta por @solperez

Tendrán un mínimo de palabras y podría usar imágenes de banco de fotos pixabay?