RE: 📺 TV Series Review: Continuum

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📺 TV Series Review: Continuum

in hive-166960 •  3 months ago 

Your post is generally well-written, but I found a few areas that could be improved:

Mistakes & Issues:

  1. Grammar & Clarity Issues:

    • "Having travelled back in time (just a couple of weeks), there are 2 Alec's battling it out."

      • Correction: Having traveled back in time (just a couple of weeks), there are two Alecs battling it out.
      • Reason: "Alec's" is incorrect; the plural of "Alec" is "Alecs."
    • "Only to later discover that the original Kiera was shot dead."

      • Correction: She later discovers that the original Kiera was shot dead.
      • Reason: The sentence is incomplete and needs a subject.
    • "Her attitude towards the terrorist time travellers softens and in some episodes, she even teams up with her old foes."

      • Correction: Her attitude towards the terrorist time travelers softens, and in some episodes, she even teams up with her old foes.
      • Reason: A comma is needed before "and" to separate two independent clauses.
  2. Lack of Context:

    • "Something happened... so I'm awaiting season 4."
      • This sentence is vague. What exactly happened? A more precise explanation would make this stronger.
  3. Inconsistent Spelling:

    • "time travellers" vs. "time travelers"
      • Be consistent. Either use British English (travellers) or American English (travelers), but not both.
  4. Awkward Wording:

    • "I'll defer my rating until I've watched Season 4!"
      • Could be clearer: I'll hold off on rating the show until I've finished Season 4!
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