anomalous mentation
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original poetry by @d-pend
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featuring art by elgama
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anomalous mentation
from a shattered nexus
streams the sun-cracked waves
de-encrypting sanities
and colouring them with the impossible.
over the stark edges
pours hope—
purgatorial cascades
seeping down through cracks.
rivers of living capacity,
fuel
or extinguishers of turmoil.
flexibility the zealot's bane
bring wands of poplar,
bless the hazy revolution
swirling in petrochemical angst
over heads under foot falling greenery.
chlorophyllic solvents,
discontent until
disillusioned factories of bliss dissolve
into oblivion.
natural or force her hand sweet earth
bow down and suffer,
or stand at risk of greatness
rising forth.
dreams
from a split psyche
sloughing off snakeskin,
re-encrypted destinies
that resonate
in a swaggering rhythm.
limit-spent minstrels sing to my children
of what is lovely—
and what is cursed
in the mind of men.
Written by
@d-pend
7/28/18
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Art by elgama
.1 — "Nest"
2 — "Contact"
3 — "Veedu"
My two cents:
@d-pend's poems are all good, what I really like his poems are the images that put in every sentence, the hardest part is the images, symbols sometimes are overlapping or I'm lost in cold space because I really don't know the background of the poem, that's one. Two, his poem is like metallic poem, space, metaphysical, hard rock music, imbued with the superficial problem of the society, men, in particular, and also infused with methaporical exaggeration to keep us awake that will make us feel how the poem is flowing inside our hypothalamus that eventually thought process it until our brains cooked up or pass/guess its reality with flying colors because his poems are the sample and the epitome of its existence in the modern society!
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Perfect way to speak on the juxtaposition we are in as spiritual beings in this society.
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The images you find to go with your poems are always so amazing! :)
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a good combination of verse that mixes the natural with the chemical ... hehehe, it never occurred to me to do poetry that to name fuel sounds very good.
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I miss that crazy poetry days... Do you still have class there?
Hope you're doing good bro. Have a great day!
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I liked the use of chlorophyllic solvents in the poem!
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I know this is a classic but I have to discuss in class to understand the concept.
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Hola,debo decir que me encanto mucho su poema.
Mi parte favorita es cuando dice: sueños
de una psique dividida
desprendiéndose de piel de serpiente . Sin duda muy hermoso,saludos.
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you are too creative in writing
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You have a nice choice of words, supported with matching pictures. I really enjoyed your piece
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you have deep creativity in writing
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This post has received a 9.23 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @d-pend.
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great my dear friend
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You're a real artist. Cool!
This is my page deviantart
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Amazing...
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@d-pend
Your poetry writing skills are good always.
Keep steeming
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like this poem so sweet
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